Individual Description

Writing Task: Term One, #1

1.  Write an individual profile about yourself. In your first paragraph, describe yourself.
2.  In the second paragraph, describe your family. 
3.  In the third paragraph, describe the community you come from.
4.  In the fourth paragraph, describe your sporting and cultural interests and hobbies. 
5.  In the fifth and final paragraph, write about what are your hopes and fears about your life at TPS in 2013.

 Each paragraph should: Start with a key sentence, which tells the reader what the subject of the paragraph will be. Stick to this subject throughout the paragraph. Contain specific detail e.g. names of people and places Remember to... think about who your audience is (for this task, it is your teacher). Write using suitable language and style to suit this audience. This work will be presented both online and in the classroom.

 Not Achieved Profile is not complete. Does not include all paragraphs outlined in instructions. Achieved Profile is complete. There are 5 clear paragraphs. Most sentences make sense and start with a capital letter and end with a full stop. Other punctuation may be used. Most language suits the audience and purpose. The writer has tried to include poetic language.

Merit Profile is complete. There are 5 clear paragraphs that stick to the subject and that flow throughout the writing. The details are specific. The language is purposeful and effective. Correct punctuation throughout the writing. All sentences make sense with very few mistakes. The writer has used poetic language.

 Excellence Profile is complete. 5 paragraphs are structured correctly and flow throughout the writing. The details are specific, with added detail for effect. Correct punctuation is used throughout the writing. All sentences make sense with no mistakes. The writer has used some poetic language for effect. Begin Writing Here:

 My name is Fili Rosa and I’m 12 years old I have light brown eyes and short black hair. I’m half Tongan and half Samoan.I have four brothers and I’m the only girl. I’m a giggly girl I laugh a lot even when nothing is funny at all.I love hanging with my dad in the weekend because that’s the only special time we can have a father and daughter time without any people bugging us.I love cooking for my family sometimes when I feel like cooking and sometimes I’m just lazy to even get out of bed. I’m the second to last youngest child in the family. I love praying with my family, it’s a time we can worship and say bible verses,say prayer and that is a time we spend time together as family I'ma Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School.

 My family is a funky family. Sometimes they are upset but all the time they are happy.They love their island food.My mum is a house wife all the time. My dad is a chef at Mission Bay in a restaurant called Mamma Mia. My two oldest brothers are in Australia. My 3rd oldest brother is at a boarding school at Pukekohe called Wesley College. My little brother is a year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School too. I live in Point England, Auckland. I used to live in Panmure since me and all my brothers were born. We loved living in that house but when I hit 10 years it was goodbye old house and hello new house. I never wanted to move in the first place. I tried talking my parents out of it but they still continued with the moving houses. My hobby is learning how to play guitar, I love playing piano,singing but never sing in front of people. I love doing the island dance when it comes to birthdays,weddings,and other occasions. I love cooking. My number #1 hobby is that I love learning subjects like Reading and Writing.

My number one hope is to leave Tamaki Primary School achieving all my goals and have a good attitude during class, but most of all is all my hope is to get a good report and get to the National Standard. I hope it is, and to make my father really proud. My fears are trying new things at T.P.S and getting distracted a lot and how it might affect my report.